First dratf- narration

1. What do people already know about my topic?

 

all of people already know that computer is very important thing in society and It has lots of effects. Today, most of family have a computer and link to internet. Computer is good at finding informations or calculating. Also we can play games or chat with friends. We can make friends through computer. But these are can cause negative effects. Some people could be addicted in internet or suffer from cyber violation.

2. What research has already been done about my topic?

Internet policies and laws in 21century by 임규철

3. What are the implications of my argument (What if I'm right? What if I'm right and people ignore me?)

People could recognize that computer has lots of positive effects and possibility to remove negative effects. People will use computer in more effective and more practical way. And people will not suffer from some of negative effects such as addiction of cyber violation.