We should encourage to use computer(Positive effects of computer)
Today, Most of people would have and use computer. It means computer is very important thing in our society. Today, Computers and the Internet have touched almost all aspects of life. Because, computer make people do their work very comfortably. My argument is that we should encourage to use computer. As you know, computer is a dual-aspect thing. It could be useful but also it could harmful. It depends on state of user. Also we should know that how to make computer as a good thing. we can make some friends through chat with other and play a game. It is an entertain tool. It has enormous advantages. However, some people say that computer is useful but it can cause negative effects such as addiction. Yes, a computer can cause a serious problem if someone use it excessively. But, if we think carefully, we can find that computer has more positive effects that negative effects. It is true that computer makes some problem. It can cause addiction or some violent behavior because there are some violent and lewd things in cyberspace. But as I said, computer has lots of positive effects and we can eliminate the negative effects of a computer. I will teach the methods a bit later. I assert that we should not neglect to use a computer but encourage. And to eliminate some problems, we should learn how to avoid some negative effects.
My thesis statement is that we should encourage to use a computer and remove negative effects. Computer is a very common tool today. But we can't deny that it can give enormous effects to human. It is good at calculating and data retrieval and lots of thing. Computer has been evolving our technologies and societies. But, it has not just benefits. Because of popularizing, it took negative effects too. It makes people addicted and some people could suffer from cyber violence. Because of these, some people say that computer is a bad thing and we should regulate to use it. But, It sounds ridiculous. As you know that computer give us lots of help to live comfortably. We can do our work easier, send an e-mail, play games, chat with friends, make some friends and so many things. Now, Our life would be difficult to live without computer. In my essay, internet means global computer network providing a variety of information and communication facilities, consisting of interconnected networks using standardized communication protocols. Addiction is an internet addiction which is occurred by games or chats. Cyber violence is a crime that is happened on cyberspace. I will tell the lots of positive effects of computer and finally I will argue that people should encourage computer and use it in a good way. Through my essay, People could recognize that computer has lots of positive effects and Its importance. People could use a computer in more effective and more practical way. I will accent the positive effects of computer and argue with computer’s problem. People would be encouraged to use computer and though that computer is a good thing and very helpful to our life.
I think people should encourage to use a computer. Computer has lots of benefits. Since a computer appeared, human evolved rapidly. And today, we can take lots of advantages of computer. It makes people communicate faster and easier. We can send an e-mail or chat with friends everywhere and every time if we have computer. So we can share some information, talk with friends and make some friends. It was a base of revolution. People have been able to share information easily because of computer, so people have been able to find and get enormous information. If we have a curiosity, we just send e-mail to friends or experts or search in internet. For example. Instead of going to your doctor and paying a ton of money for a doctor's visit, you may be able to self-diagnose yourself with information found online. We can also search lots of another things such as job, people, flights... Actually we can find most of information on internet. Computer make us live in comfortable. Also it is good at calculating and data arrangement. So we can do our works faster and more comfortable. It was the reason that human could be evolved rapidly. We can deal with our work in a short time. And there are lots of interesting things on cyberspace. We can play games and watch movies or web toon. When we are boring, it can make us exciting. If we use it adequately, it could be a leisure activity. If we see deeply, our society is made by computer. It is not exaggeration. Think our school and home. Most of teacher use a computer to teach students. Computer can carry lots of information and it can make some programs which is useful to teach. Teacher can give influent education to students. Students can use it effectively too. In school or home, they can search some curious things and could be learned through e-learning. It makes people easier to teach and learn than before. And our technologies are developed rapidly by computer. Most of scientists use computer to survey and process data. It is because computer can process enormous data in short time. So scientists need less time that before to study. Because of computer's ability, our science have been developed amazingly. For example, people can study about space and even we can go there. Space science needs processing of enormous data. If people don't have computer, it would be an unthinkable think that human can go to space. Moreover, computer is important between countries. All country need a computer to trade with other countries or share their information. Without computer, we must to go to other country to deal with trivial thing. So, computer is very important for human. Computer gives lots of advantages and it has been good to people. Computer was a trigger to human evolving. I think we can't live well without computer in now. Computer is a very useful tool and one of the most important part of our life.
It is true that computer has negative effects too. In our body, computer could damage our eyes and cut into much-needed sleep time. Also if some people use computer excessively, he or she could be addicted. It is one of the most dangerous problem. Some people who are internet-addicted could be an outsider from society. However, I think that negative effects are not more than positive effects. Still computer is one of the most important and useful tools and has enormous advantages. And if we take more care for computer, we could solve most of problems. To protect computer addiction, we should make some rules and follow it. For example, people should not turn on the computer without precise purpose. And we can get some help from family. If you can't control yourself, family's advice could be efficient. Also time control software is one of the methods to protect computer addiction. It announces that how many times you use to computer and over the set time it makes a computer turned off. And in family, school, some institutions should educate their member. They should teach their member about danger of computer and how to prevent internet addiction. If you think that you already addicted, you could go to a center of internet addiction and treat it. We can use a computer without addiction if we take more care and try to remove it. And To solve cyber violence, we need not only personal effort but also government's effort to remove it. First, government educate people about riskiness of cyber violence, sickness of victim and how to remove it. And real-name policy is one of the methods to remove cyber violence. I said, user of computer is anonymous and some people use this feature badly. So real-name policy will be efficient to reduce bad comments or abuses. Also people's think should be changed. Some people think that their comments will not harmful to others and bad comments are just kidding. It is definitely untrue. People should consider others situation and not think only for their interests. Most of problems, we can solve them through people and government's efforts. We should change our think and try to understand other situation and we can remove most of negative effects of computer. We have the power to solve all problem. As I say, we can fix computer’s problem and computer has more positive effects. So it is ridiculous that computer is harmful and make people idiot. Computer is one of the best invention to human.
In conclusion, we can't deny that computer is an astonished invention. It makes people evolved rapidly and make our works easier and comfortable. Computer makes us live in comfortable and developed our society. Our science is developed rapidly by computer. Moreover it consolidate the globe. It is true that computer has both of negative and positive effects. But computer has more positive effects than negative effects. Also If people have wiil to remove the negative effects, people can do it. Because people have the ability to solve some problems. So I think that computer is very magnificent and useful tool and we should reject to use a computer. I really assert that we should encourage to use it.
1. What is my thesis? Although some people say computer is harmful, I think computer has lots of positive effects and people could remove some problems. So It could be a very useful tool.