1. What is my thesis? Although some people say computer is harmful, I think computer has lots of positive effects and people could remove some problems. So It could be a very useful tool.
2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis? I am using some statistical datas for negative effects of computer. through these, I will find problems. Also I am using experts opinion to solve problems.
3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?
My arguments almost based on logic evidence. I can find statistical data from reliable institution.
I think people should encourage to use computer and we can remove negative effects of computer. First, I will say about positive and negative effects of computer. Since computer appeared, human evolved rapidly. And today, we can take lots of advantages of computer. It makes communication faster and easier. We can send e-mail or chat with friends everywhere and everytime if we have computer. So we can share some informations, talk with friends and make some friends. And it makes researching things a lot faster and cheaper. For example. instead of going to your doctor and paying a ton of money for a doctor's visit, you may be able to self diagnose yourself with information found online. we can also search lots of another things such as job, people, flights... Actually we can find everything in internet. And it is good at calculating and data arrangement. So we can do our works more comfortable. It was the reason that human could evolved rapidly. Also there lots of interesting things on cyber space. We can play games and watch movies or webtoon. When we are boring, it can make us exciting. If we use it adequately, it could be leisure activity. Computer gives lots of advantages and it has been good to people. Computer was a trigger to human evolving and today, I think we can't live well without computer. Computer is a part of our life and very useful tool.
On the other hand, computer has negative effects too. In our body, computer could damage our eyes and cut into much-needed sleep time. Also if some people use computer excessively, he or she could be addicted. Like this data, number of addicted people is increased gradually. It is one of the most dangerous problem. Some people who is internet-addicted could be an outsider from society.
In cyber space. most of people is anonymous. They use the internet without their real name and information. So, some people use this advantage badly. They attack some people and hack others computer. For example, in korea, woman who was an actless was committed suicide because of evil comments. She was suffered from cyber violence and took a bad choice finally. And another example, a group which name was 'anonymous' hacked the north korea government home page. Because of this, relationship between north and south korea was degraded. Like these, computer has lots of problems too.
However. I think that negative effects are not more than positive effects. Still computer is one of the most important and useful tool and has enormous advantages. Also if we take more care for computer, we could solve most of problems. I will say about solution to solve some problems. To protect computer addiction, we should make some rules and follow it. For example, people should not turn on the computer without precise purpose. And we can get some help from family. If you can't control yourself, family's advice could be efficient. Also time control software is one of the method to protect computer addiction. It announce that how many times you use to computer and over the set time it makes computer turned off. And in family, school, some institutions should educate their member. They should teach their member about danger of computer and how to prevent internet addiction. If you think that you already addicted, you could go to center of internet addiction and treat it. We can use computer without addiction if we take more care and try to remove it. And To solve cyber violence, we need not only personal effort but also government's effort to remove it. First, government educate people about riskiness of cyber violence, sickness of victim and how to remove it. And real-name policy is one of the method to remove cyber violence. I said, user of computer is anonymous and some people use this feature badly. So real-name policy will be efficient to reduce bad comments or abuses. Also people's think should be changed. Some people think that their comments will not harmful to others and bad comments are just kidding. It is definitely untrue. People should consider others situation and not think only for their interests. Most of problems, we can solve them through people and government's efforts. We should change our think and try to understand other situation and we can remove most of negative effects of computer.
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